What I've learned from surfing around here is this, you want the reader to feel what she's undergoing. She turns her head and no sensation of vision until she realizes then feels what? Can she even open her eyes without something touching/scratching her frigging eyes out? A blindfold that's tight/loose/large/small/rough/smooth. The ground is cold damp concrete/dirt/mattress that smells like vomit/aroma of Murphy's Soap Oil on a hardwood floor making her feel warm and fuzzy all-over. Sounds? She hears men/women/children laughing at cartoons/aliens/farm animals/a long unzipping sound. Does unzipping and zipping sound the same? Hold on..........Well I'll be damned Nurse called a young boy's room after he was coming out of anaesthesia, tonsils removed. She called his name several times and he finally answered, "Yes Lord, what do you want?"
