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  1. dillseed

    dillseed Active Member

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    Your pick... 1 or 2?

    Discussion in 'Word Mechanics' started by dillseed, May 18, 2014.

    Which would you go with?

    (1) Mike scored twenty points; Steve, seventeen; and Larry, six.

    (2) Mike scored twenty points, Steve seventeen, and Larry six.


    Thanks.
     
  2. thirdwind

    thirdwind Contributing Member Contest Administrator Reviewer Contributor

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    Number 2.
     
  3. dillseed

    dillseed Active Member

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    Thank you. I thought that fewer punctuation marks looked better.
     

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