Well it's more of a failed seduction attempt. Basically my story is about a female serial rapist/killer type villain. The reason why she became the way she is, is because all her life, men have constantly rejected her, causing her to feel more and more shame growing up, causing involuntary celibacy, until she finally snaps and has violent urges towards them. She would be about in her 30s now I am imagining for my story. The story is set in a modern day American city setting, but haven't decided which city yet. However, I find the character difficult to write because in reality, it seems that it's very easy for women to get dates and not have to feel lonely, or ashamed with themselves. There is one woman who is a friend of my gf, and she not to be mean or anything, but she isn't as good looking, cause she has a deformation in her face, that is quite significant, and she doesn't dress that well or class or anything like that. But she gets guys all the time. I mean it seems to me, that a woman who had this problem of men rejecting her, would have to be really hideous to put it honestly. Like maybe Harvey Dent in The Dark Knight kind of hideous. But the problem with that is, is that I want the reader to view this character as a person who can somewhat blend in too. I wrote it so that it's told from the main character detective's point of view. And he is investigating a mysterious unknown villain and does not find out who she is till about halfway to two thirds through the story roughly. But the character it turns out to be is someone he knows from the case, who was right under his nose the whole time, and he was fooled, along with the reader. But how can I write it so that this villain, has to appear to be normal enough to fool the main character halfway or more into the story, but at the same time be undesirable to the point where she cannot get any dates or sex? If the character is suppose to be undesirable to almost all men, the detective would likely figure out who the suspect may be therefore, right? She also has a scene where she tries to seduce a male character and it fails. But how can I write it so that her efforts do not have an an effect on him, when basically she is going to dressed nice, and giving it her all? What do you think?